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H-Bomb
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PostSubject: The psychotic one   Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:45 am

Something spontaneous that came to mind. Short too. Here goes

In one empty room, slightly dark with no windows, two men standing. Both men facing eachother. The psychotic one, and the apathetic one. The psychotic one has an obsession with killing. The apatheic one held a large mirror in front of him. The psychotic one only saw himself in the mirror and not the apathetic one. The psychotic one became aggressive and began scratching the mirror, wishing death on his believed victim. Suddenly, a loud bang echoed through the room. Shrapnel of glass spread across the room and there lay the psychotic one...dead. The apathetic one still stands holding what's left of the large mirror. In his other hand, a smoking gun...


Something a few months old now. It just came to me like a lightning bolt on a clear day lol. No offense to psychotic people... Anyway, it's open for enterpretation so...go crazy. XP
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PostSubject: Re: The psychotic one   Tue Jul 15, 2008 9:43 pm

Um...
All I can say is, your name suits you.
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PostSubject: Re: The psychotic one   Wed Jul 16, 2008 4:26 am

I don't think psychotic people take offense to anything.

It's interesting, but it should be longer.
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PostSubject: Re: The psychotic one   Wed Jul 16, 2008 4:55 am

OMG it's so deep!

But seriously, I think I understand the reasoning behind.

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PostSubject: Re: The psychotic one   Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:45 pm

SRSLY?
Do tell!
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PostSubject: Re: The psychotic one   Fri Jul 18, 2008 6:22 am

It's no fun if I tell you. Think about it...

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PostSubject: Re: The psychotic one   Sun Jan 25, 2009 5:30 am

Wow this writing is good.
its a short story that allows your imagination to run wild.
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